I love the heck out of this song, but at over 3mins, if this song was to become a pop sensation it’d need to be trimmed. First up, that jaw has got to go. 90s kids wanna hear guitar riffs. Also the song should just be called Better Than to help listeners identify the song easier. The “share your love with me” chorus was well produced, but the U2 vibe and earnest lyrics clashed with the tone of the rest of the song, so those have been trimmed. I’ll admit it needs more of a “third act” to round it out now, but I think this song has a really good momentum without those choruses.
Full version by Evan Olson here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=WfePYWCTTrs